the audio needs work, especially the sound effects. it's satisfying hearing a nice good quality audio mixed with a cartoon. those footsteps are just horrible, and i didn't realize the first guy was shot first time i watched.
The animation was too stiff. instead of them going back to the original pose you should make them change pose completely. this quadruples the work and i get why you didn't do it since it's not very good written and has cheap audio.
also don't turn down the volume of a voice if you're supposed to pay attention to what they say
i love your animations, man. for what you worked with this is awesome. this could have been one of these youtube songs with awesome animated music video if the song had more elements. i liked the song but it felt kind of flat and boring. what kept me listening was the visuals
i was gonna tell you not to waste your animation skills on some undertale bullshit, but it seems to be doing good on your youtube channel so whatever. i can see that this is not really made for the newgrounds community
Nice animation! I particularly liked the profile lip sync of the girl. The lyrics were a bit disappointing though, I liked a few lines but didn't like the rest at all. I'm not a big fan of song parodies because the lyrics can often just be shat out. It's rarely impressive like in this case. I would also have preferred a different perspective rather than a looped animation with barely noticeable lip sync over a background of things happening. The loop was overused and it felt very flat with only that one perspective. By removing it you could achieve something bigger
Ahha this was awesome man
u had me at sexy clock u lost me at elsa and too many sex jokes
it would've looked better with LESS frame rate in my opinion
rated 4 because only half of this video had realistic audio
The character is deaf you insensitive.
voted 3 because baked bean
omg I knew it would help
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