the audio needs work, especially the sound effects. it's satisfying hearing a nice good quality audio mixed with a cartoon. those footsteps are just horrible, and i didn't realize the first guy was shot first time i watched.
The animation was too stiff. instead of them going back to the original pose you should make them change pose completely. this quadruples the work and i get why you didn't do it since it's not very good written and has cheap audio.
also don't turn down the volume of a voice if you're supposed to pay attention to what they say
i love your animations, man. for what you worked with this is awesome. this could have been one of these youtube songs with awesome animated music video if the song had more elements. i liked the song but it felt kind of flat and boring. what kept me listening was the visuals
i was gonna tell you not to waste your animation skills on some undertale bullshit, but it seems to be doing good on your youtube channel so whatever. i can see that this is not really made for the newgrounds community
I like the little song, and it's not even a bad idea for a game. Played it for an hour.
Like already has been mentioned, a scroller would improve this game a lot. You can feel really stuck on a few levels, so it'd be nice having something to interact with in the game. It makes it feel just a tad less like a brick wall. Unless a brick wall is what you're going for!
I completed it, so I guess it's not that bad.
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